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Tuesday, September 23, 2008

My sunshine's birthday

Yesterday was my life partner's birthday. As promised, I will give her the birthday present virtually this year. Hope you like this.














It’s your birthday, my dear Phung
Birthday song from heart I sung
I want to wish you all the best
Sit down and enjoy all the rest

Grab a glass of sparkly wine
A toast to the very fine
First to your friendship and to mine
They will forever remain divine

Turn the music and let’s dance
To celebrate this day of fun
Turn and swirl and shake our butts
Laugh our heads off ‘til we’re nuts


Not to miss our favorite task
Oh, no it’s not about facial mask
Eat a hearty scrumptious meal
Is what we always had for a deal

Of course you need a birthday cake
A real large one to accommodate
Flames of candles blazed up high
They will take you to cloud nine


This poem is specially written to celebrate
Though you are miles apart from me, my mate
To you my darling sunshine friend
Hope our friendship never ends.


Happy 24th Birthday Karen Phung!

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is such a cool poem! The one receiving it must be very happy!

aikhooi said...

erm.. the only comment she said is "eh, ur poem not rhyme la" hahaha...bad karen. never appreciate..

Anonymous said...

aiyo... i do appreciate la... just that, i remembered u thought me how to compose a poem last time in form 6 ma.... that was the 1st thing that came in my mind when i read the poem here...

*flash back*
when to create a poem, usually it's between 5 to 8 syllables...
then, find the last word's similar sound for the next line...
then only it can rhymes..
*end*

that's why lor, i said it don't rhymes...

still remember our 'walking down the memory lane' poem?
actually i forgot what comes after that d...
doink...

anyway, to officiate my gratitude...

i, hereby am grateful and thankful (redundancy) that, you (my life time partner, hooi) had written me such a beautiful and touchy poem as my birthday gift...

thank you...

;p
;p

aikhooi said...

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